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@elishavet-pidyon

Inglor! No!

*Grabs baby elfling*

*Yeets off into forest*

I think Inglor is the epitome of that “what are you going to do with the sharp edges of your soul?” “Cut vegetables.” meme.

@whalekeeper

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Please say Remi survives the book. I will happily read about all sorts of wild weird French Alice in Revolution Land, but…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Bwahahahhaha!

I won’t say don’t worry, but I think I finally found a way his story could turn out well. See, a perfect sphere is pretty, but something broken, something sharp – that could cut bonds.

Our faith is not destroyed by trials, and hope is not quenched by depression. Sometimes we need to break a little to be whole.

That…[Read more]

@loopylin

=D

@whalekeeper

Ironically… he does. Represented by a glowing river rock his dad helped him find.

*cue sudden revelation*

*thunder*

Nevermind. He’s totally gonna lose that rock. His hope must die. It’s his rock bottom. That’s the mortality. AAAHHHHHHHH.

I finally figured out the midpoint climax!!!!

But considering I want to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

His name somehow communicates that to me. Not concretely, but you know what I mean. It sounds dreamy to me, but also a little foreboding because of the –lor ending

Really? *feels imense satisfaction*

Hehehe.

I think I’m justified in nerding out a bit, and saying that I love it.

Yes, you are justified. Loving your story is ide…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Glad to make my contribution. *bows majestically*

That is valid. XD Inglor is my MC in the story we first set out to write in Ari’s world. It’s at least a thousand years after Ari and life is different, but there are still the same evils around. Somehow, even though whenever we actually write in his story he’s a bundle of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Okay, those are hilarious and also call me out. How dare you. XD

Except I feel sorry for Remmington. XD

✨Graditude✨

@whalekeeper
*nods a thanks for closing the door; it’s a little crazy out there right now*

yes; comfort series.
hmm.. I like Kate ( though that seems predictable, but I sort of understand her).

I’m gonna have to say the first one is my favorite.

Why I like it: It has a lot of good points for me. One thing is that it has the child hero thi…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s so weird not knowing everyone. It’s been the same people on here for almost 4 years and it feels so weird to introduce myself lol

@whalekeeper

Yeah, I opened my email and I was like WHATTT

And I logged onto Kingdom Pen and it’s very overstimulating 😭 I will get used to it I guess but wow it’s crazy

@whalekeeper
Should I be careful??;] Yes…I am a fan of mysterious Benedict society. You?

GUYS WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper you guys are WHAT NOW???

And the KP people are ALIVE?!?!

I’ve been gone for so long lol I need to catch up hahahahaha

@esther-c @jonas @whalekeeper @keilah-h

After much thought (and casually disappearing again) I have decided what I want to do.

I’m still working on developing the plotline, as it has changed a lot.

I’m not sure if I’ll ever finish this story because I change it so much, but I honestly just write for fun so I guess if it’s fun, I should be…[Read more]

@whalekeeper
i know I’m not exactly part of this conversation, but i struggle with plotting and was reading your post. That is a brilliant way to do it! Thanks

@whalekeeper

Hehehe!

Thank you for that. The dichotomy of my feelings about this new development are now expressed in meme form. I may go on with contentment.

@reaganramm

Thank you so much!! I actually really like that 10 milestone framework! I have heard of the 5 milestone framework and have attempted using it before, however I then realized that it absolutely destroys my plot when I have to fill in gaps by pantsing 😅 I will definitely try this!

@whalekeeper

Is it possible that the structure…

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@whalekeeper

ah, I see, I see.

thats so exciting !! Eeeee I need to find some time to say hello to everyone. ✨

@whalekeeper Do ittt

@whalekeeper @rae @keilah-h this doesn’t directly affect your characters yet but im tagging you anyway

Rallascant

Rallascant had been shooed away from the vegetable garden by the local Iris many times, but this time he was sure he would get away with it. He sat among the green leaves, legs and rabbit ears tucked in to remain as unnoticeable as…[Read more]

@beth-torres

@whalekeeper

@renegade

idk if any of you have time right now to critique,  but Lillian has a story to share. Tag some others if you think they would be good sources for fantasy critiques.

@koshka

Greetings!

I think I’d rather ride the dragon, depending, of course, on the type of dragon.

Jellybeans aren’t a good item if you’ve eaten other food that day, but if you haven’t, they are food. I hope that makes sense?

@whalekeeper

It’s nice to meet you!

I have watched the movie and listened to 6 different cast recordings of Les…[Read more]